Jojo Pro Cop Application

[Jojo]

PART I: Introduction

Nickname:jojo0906
Account name: jojo
Age:14
In 2-3 lines, tell us about yourself:
Im an algerian 14 years old boy studying in middle school last year i love playing sports like basket ball football etc and i hit the gym everyday

PART II: Background check

Do you have RP binds?: Yes

Current Squad: SWAT
Approximate date of joining: 15 february 2024
Link to your application for the squad that you are currently a member of: not applicable 

Are you an ex-PC member? If yes, why were you removed?: No
Have you ever been banned? If yes, why and when?: No

PART III : Rules check 

Have you read the entirety of the "Pro Cops Guide" topic?: Yes
What are the rules for the Dog spawn?: 
1- You have to act your role 

2- Dogs cant spawn without a handler 

3- Dogs cant arrest

4- Dogs cant talk like a human in localchat

5- Dogs have to listen to there handlers
Briefly explain the following rules in your own words:

Rule number 4: When starting a pursuit, you should offer the criminal an opportunity to surrender, which can reduce their jail time by 75%.
Rule number 5: When you chasing give suspects enough time to respond for your orders [do not spam your PC binds) 
Rule number 7: When you join Pro Cops, you’re on probation for 2 weeks. During this time, you need to display "Name|PC*" or "SQUAD|Name|PC*" in your name to show you're a probationary Pro Cop. This ensures that others can easily identify you as a Pro Cop either through your roleplay name or regular nickname
Rule number 9: After receiving an invitation, you must sign in at the PC-Forum. If you fail to sign in, you risk being removed from the Pro Cop role, and it will be challenging to prove your previous status if removed by mistake. Additionally, once signed in, you cannot edit your sign-in information, as doing so is considered fraud.

PART IV: Roleplay commands

Explain how and when the /me command is used. Include an example: The /me command is always used to perform an action or describe a character actions in a narrative in role playing scenarios
1-/me carefully inspects the ancient scrolls, searching for any hidden messages.

2-/me looks around the room and asks, "Does anyone know where the key might be hidden?

3- /me helps to create a richer, more immersive roleplaying experience by filling in details that guide the scene.

Explain how and when the /do command is used. Include an example: /do command is used to provide additional context or details that enhance the narrative. It helps describe actions, environments, or conditions that aren't explicitly stated in dialogue.
Examples: 

1-/do As you search the back of the van, you find a stash of contraband hidden under a loose panel.

2-/do The papers you are examining show a photo that closely matches your description, but it's slightly blurred.

3-/do would i find any illegal reports on the suspect? 

Final Confirmation:

I [Jojo], swear that all the information provided in this application is only the truth and nothing but the truth.

With this application I promise to act in accordance with the rules and regulations at all times, to perform my duties professionally and to never misuse the equipment or means provided to me by the San Andreas Police Department

I swear to protect the innocent and uphold the law of the state of San Andreas and the constitution of the United States of America.

Solemnly,

[Jojo]

Edited August 29 by Jojo

[Phrost]

Hello @Jojo

Thank you for your interest in becoming a member of Pro Cops. After a thorough analysis of your application we've concluded the following:

- Explanation of /do is incorrect, so is the example that you made.

- The explanation of /me is correct, but the examples are wrong.

- The explanation of Rule 7 is too brief; please rewrite it in more detail.

- The explanation of Rule 8 is too brief; please rewrite it in more detail.

- The explanation of Rule 4 is too brief; please rewrite it in more detail.

Attempt to resolve the issues listed here and we'll be reviewing your application once again in the days to come. Also, there are punctuation, grammar, and capitalization errors in some parts of the application. Please review all of them carefully.

Thank you.

Phrost
On behalf of PC Staff

Edited August 25 by Phrost

[Jojo]

Fixed sir @Phrost

Edited September 2 by Jojo

[Infinity_]

Dear @Jojo

We would like to thank you for your interest in wanting to become part of PC. Unfortunately, your application did not meet the expectations we were looking for. After being told to review the aforementioned mistakes carefully, you still failed to use the correct examples.

I noticed you mention you are part of SWAT, I would strongly advise you to interchange into SAPA so we can help you on these basics or you can even decide to take the internal PC program, offered to everyone, to help them become more knowledgeable on radio usage, /me & /do and anything you might need help with.

On behalf of SAPD, we wish you good luck and you may reapply in 30 days if you are still interested in becoming part of PC through our external program.