Denied, using something from another is not allowed, and says enough about you. reapply in 2 week and use your own words.
hang with TST so they can get to know you, and as you did copy this from another apply i would like to see your RP skills first anyway
Give us atleast one good reason to accept you?: I am an New player in SAES.Also I am a god damn roleplay machine.I think being roleplayer is enough reason.